Wednesday, April 7, 2010

Troublesome Lines for the Actors

Here's some lines where I noticed the actors had issues. The issues range from simple word-confusion to flat-out forgetting it entirely.

Oheygoodmorning
O: Oh hi- Good morning…
YL: She said we'll…
YL: Do you want to take…

You've made my life like water
O: No
O: Shit shit. I'm sorry…

The Golem
O: I found it in my house…
YL: I mean it sounds like…
O: Um. It was really strong…
YL: And the rabbi…

Like your Golem
YL: We shouldn't stay too long…
YL: Look up, Ollie.
YL: You mean what your mom…
O: It's more like…
YL: Forget it.
YL: Hey. You know…
O: What?
YL: Look.

Oliver and his mother. Photostrip
OM: What's that?
O: Photos

Everything was electric.
YL: Mmm?
O: It's beautiful…
YL: When?
O: Last night.
YL: Like now?
O: Wake up.
YL: Now?

A boat
YL: Look. Lightning…
YL: Do you like it…
O & YL: All the line between "Cast the nets…" and "Pull the nets!"
YL: You left these.
YL: It's your mom's?
YL: Was the stuff…
YL: What about-
YL: Not any more…
YL: Hey, Ollie…
O: Hey.
YL: What happened?
O: YL…
YL: Now?
O: Now… "Oh hi oh hi…"
YL: Is it such a big deal?

Oliver, his mother, and the Golem
O: Sometimes I think I can…
O: Just YL…

Being a golem is easy…
YL: Oh. And then we…
O: Did you- Thanks…
YL: What I meant is…

YL by himself. Pillage
O: Sometimes we know…

Is Ollie here
YL: He's- um pulled…
YL: He's separated himself…
YL: When I look at…
OM: Oliver? Oliver.

We don't act like people (2)
O: We don't-
OM: Oliver? Oliver? Oliver, are you here? Oliver?
O: Yeah.
OM: It looks like him.
O: Yeah.

The ocean filled up with something else
YL: I had this dream…
YL: Yeah. You weren't there…
YL: All that…
YL: I've just wanted you to say-
O: What? I don't know what…
YL: Look.
YL: Look, Oliver, remember…
O: I really thought I was…
YL: You didn't. It's not though…
YL: Everybody has shit…

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