Tranistion Notes (Kathi)

Transitions:
Between 1-3: (fluid movement)
Between 3-4: Oliver goes over steps and platform to cross into YL’s room.
Between 4-5: Boys exit YL’s room through his door, immediately go up steps and down boardwalk.
Between 5-6: Boys get up from beach, YL goes into his own room, Oliver veers off to “run and get stuff from his house” (golem book). Enters through YL’s door.
Between 6-7: Boys finish dialogue from scene 6 and stay in room, while Paula enters from stairs and comes down boardwalk with laundry.
Between 7-8: as soon as door to Oliver’s room, closes, boys should be coming up the steps to the boardwalk.
Between 8-9: YL starts whistling during transition, both boys go back to their own rooms.
Between 9-10: Could Paula close Oliver’s door when Oliver opens YL’s door? (simultaneous)
Between 10-11: YL to desk, Ollie to room (right over boardwalk)
Between 11-12: Good transition for (one of the) boys to change clothes. Boys arrive at steps to the boardwalk at same time.
Between 12-13: Boys walk up boardwalk, Oliver to his room. YL goes offstage.
Between 13-14: As soon as Paula is out the door, YL moves down the boardwalk (Oliver catches up).
Between 14-15: Boys go straight into rooms.
Between 15-16:Oliver goes out door, YL goes out his door.
Between 16-17: Oliver moves from beach to his room as soon as Paula is out of Oliver’s room.’
Between 17-18: YL gets up from beach, faces Oliver at top of boardwalk, face-off.
Between 18-19: Oliver up off of beach, straight to room.

Scene Number/Corresponding Title
1-3: The Wall of Oliver’s life…Quiet Green Edges…Oliver is very young.
4: Oheygoodmorning.
5: You’ve made my life like water.
6: The Golem.
7: Mother Laundry.
8: Like Your Golem
9: Oliver and his Mother. Photostrip.
10: Everything was Electric.
11: YL is drawing. Oliver’s sleeping.
12: A Boat
13: Oliver, his mother, and the Golem…
14: Being a golem is easy.
15: YL by himself. Pillage.
16: Is Ollie Here.
17: We don’t act like people (2).
18: The Ocean filled up with something else.
19: Imagine a cross-section of your world